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Ten Cantos of Hopelessness
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Ten Cantos of Hopelessness |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America 
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I have to leave here. It seems I am in violation of the rules. So be it. ~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat (01-18-2011 10:39 PM).] |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Those sure pack a punch. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Thank you for reading and commenting, skyshine. ~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
What is this doing way down here? I liked the style on this one. You tell the hearbreaker's tale like nobody else. this is so you. Lori |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
A lot of heartbreak going on here. I could feel your pain. When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Very well thought out and very well done. What I think would go so nicely with this in a two-poem suite, is "Ten Cantos of Hopefulness." Owl |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Ah, thank you Lori. Never mind how far down you are. You are here, that is what matters. <><><> The_Doctors_Angel_32, I appreciate you being here. <><><> I have thought about the Ten Cantos of Hopefulness, Owl. It's on the back burner and getting warm. ~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am looking forward to them. Owl |
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