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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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0 posted 2011-01-16 12:14 PM



We all make mistakes
Nobody is ever perfect
We do things that
later on we regret
we ever did
But forgiveness
is never far behind
the mistakes we make
Nobody can stay mad
forever
For out of love
one eventually
forgives
And life keeps
moving on
like nothing ever happened

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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faithmairee
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1 posted 2011-01-16 12:45 PM


a lot of truth in this...nicely worded with a great ending...enjoyed it a lot!

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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2 posted 2011-01-16 12:46 PM


Thank you. I am glad you like it.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
3 posted 2011-01-16 07:21 AM


There are those who never let go of a slight or hurt and spend the rest of their life miserable. I just lay my burden down October, 2010. Some hurts take longer to deal with, but yes, I agree that for the most part forgiveness is just waiting to spring into action in order to heal.

~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2011-01-16 07:11 PM


"For out of love
one eventually
forgives"

that is the only way to live~~

M

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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5 posted 2011-01-17 11:55 PM


Beautiful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18
Posts 198

6 posted 2011-01-18 01:23 AM


great work i like your poem.
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