Head Over Heels - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #47

Head Over Heels

gdcod3player
Member

since 2009-09-13

Posts 70
California

0 posted 2011-01-15 06:53 PM

I take the moon out of the sky
Why would i do that for you
When you make me so blue
Of all the girls in life why do i dream of you?
I keep wishing for a dream come true
I want to give you this world
There is no one else like you
My blurry presence keeps me from seeing you
My heart wants to be put away
Lets sing all night
I want to stay with you all night
Let me be something special to you
I want to spend time with you
I believe in hope that saved me
Let the moon say everything tonight

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2011-01-15 11:56 PM

there is a romance in letting the celestial orbs speak, and you have captured the magic of it well

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

2 posted 2011-01-15 11:58 PM

This is such a romantic poem. I could feel the love as I read this poem.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-01-16 01:05 AM

yep, you're head over heels

Sweet poem about that wonderful state of being in love!

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.