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Open Poetry #47

Tanka..to wail by

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2011-01-15 04:09 PM

I made love to her
while her new boyfriend waited,
on the couch, downstairs
during my good-bye wail, he
crept upstairs to take a peek
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..Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Harmony;
reaching into the poet's heart
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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-01-15 04:17 PM

Ouch...
this reaches out, indeed.

incwrite
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since 2010-12-31

Posts 55
new york

2 posted 2011-01-15 06:05 PM

Yep...Ouchie...

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2011-01-15 10:03 PM

Rather intriguing, ha. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

4 posted 2011-01-15 11:45 PM

Ouch, that had to hurt. LOL This made me laugh too.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2011-01-16 01:09 AM

..thanks Karilea, incwrite, Trina, and
The_Doctors_Angel_32 for taking the time
to read my poem and to comment; i'm very
grateful..>>spiros
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