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Open Poetry #47

Smile

spiked4
Junior Member

since 2006-12-07

Posts 35
Hammond, La

0 posted 2011-01-14 06:12 PM

A word said in jest
An with it a grin
I've given my best
A smile with such sin.

It burns so inside
The need to have more
With it I comply
Much more than before

To see such a smile
Creates so a stir
My thoughts I compile
A shattering blur

The wickedness bound
By such a stare
Laughter we found
Now filling the air

With touches and tastes
That graze through our eyes
Lips on the napes
In Passion we try

To lift from that face
A crease in those cheeks
A beautiful place
To have such a peek
At your smile.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-01-15 11:21 AM

A genuine smile says so much...allowing a glimpse into a persons soul.

Worth a thousand words~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2011-01-15 12:58 PM

I agree with Blues.
A smile can deliver such an impact.
Well done!

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

3 posted 2011-01-15 01:32 PM

This is such a sweet poem. I like your description of a smile. I really enjoyed the read!!!

sweetcheeks639
Junior Member

since 2011-02-17

Posts 19

4 posted 2011-02-19 07:24 PM

you make me smile jsut reading that

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-02-19 08:08 PM

this is very nicely done...i love how you ended your poem...great choice of words

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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