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steavenr
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0 posted 2011-01-14 12:08 PM



exhilaration ecstasy
in cloud-cover sublime
like moon-dust dancing
through the corridors of time

sweet dreams sobbing
find sycophants kneeling
like heart-thrusts throbbing
in love-lust appealing

and the sky clears her face
on a cloudless day

belaying exhilaration
bequeathing exultation

in ecstasy sublime

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2011-01-14 12:23 PM


steavenr...enjoyed this...sycophants is such a cool name for a gourmet in training (grin)
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-01-14 12:57 PM


Sweet! (and hot)
Lori

ethome
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3 posted 2011-01-14 02:48 PM


Steaven
Love the title because it's such a good intro to your smooth gracious verses. Really very nice images.
You play off it well.

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

JerryPat
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4 posted 2011-01-14 04:25 PM


Nice work / True emotion / "Love-lust appealing" / Oh yeah . . .

Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010

steavenr
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5 posted 2011-01-14 10:52 PM


Dark, smiling back at you…wasn’t sure that word would be appreciated…now I am glad I left it in…loved your definition of it

Lori, ‘ppreciate it…seems what I have been thinking lately comes out differently on paper…glad you liked it

Eric, thank you for the kind review…glad you read it and commented

JerryPat, thank you, sir…almost took that phrase out…then thought to myself, “it’s a true descriptive phrase”…glad you  found it enjoyable

faithmairee
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6 posted 2011-01-15 12:00 PM


great writing as usual...enjoyed it much!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

OwlSA
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7 posted 2011-01-15 12:18 PM


Beautiful and sensitive as always, Steaven.  You are a wordsmith par excellence!

Owl

steavenr
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8 posted 2011-01-15 09:19 AM


faithm, coming from a deep south gal, I am honored (always intrigued by that phrase ‘deep south’)…thank you

Owl, you are far too generous and much too kind…but if I really try, I will accept your amazing compliment without too much false humility  

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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9 posted 2011-01-15 10:00 PM


Ecstasy Sublime...Wonderful images. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

OwlSA
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10 posted 2011-01-16 01:18 AM


Giggles at your reply, Steaven!

Owl

BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2011-01-16 11:03 AM


and the sky clears her face
on a cloudless day

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Ohhhhh that's so pretty, I want to go there.

Excellent poem, steavenr~

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