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Adam's Son
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Adam's Son |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America 
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 A chip off the old block I am, No regard for propriety. Society's rules I condemn, I n'er get up until p.m. Only one thing on my mind; thee. As with the rest of Adam's kin, I am easily led by Eve. Some say my heart is made of tin, I merely nod at them and grin. I wear my lust upon my sleeve. Man, who has sprang from Adam's seed, Nation builders; weakness for her. For her embrace on knees we plead, We have such a licentious need. She is love's grand entrepreneur. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
interesting views jp..I always thought eve was the snake there and she blamed it on the dragon who got his legs pulled off.. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Suits my template of how things went down in that garden also, DS. Thanks for the appearance "Whoever is not in his coffin and the dark grave let him know he has enough."-Robert Goolrick from "Reliable Wife" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ah yes gentlemen, the great debate about Eve. Well, my thinking is that she is like any other female of the species in that the main purpose for existance is to attract the male for all the pleasurable purposes God had in mind to entice procreation.  Lori [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (01-14-2011 08:52 AM).] |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Methinks you are one hundred percent correct, Lori . . . "Whoever is not in his coffin and the dark grave let him know he has enough."-Robert Goolrick from "Reliable Wife" |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Ah, Eve. If only she hadn't swallowed......the apple. Ha. Enjoyed. I adore these lines: Some say my heart is made of tin, I merely nod at them and grin. I wear my lust upon my sleeve. -Trina |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Haha!Watch yo'self with those . . . er . . . apples, Trina. Thanks for the comment and laugh. "Whoever is not in his coffin and the dark grave let him know he has enough."-Robert Goolrick from "Reliable Wife" |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"love's grand entrepreneur" ...such a cool phrase...thoroughly enjoyed (and the banter afterward as well) |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Thank you, steavenr, I appreciate you being here. "Whoever is not in his coffin and the dark grave let him know he has enough."-Robert Goolrick from "Reliable Wife" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice spin Jerry I was wondering what that was on your sleeve. So that's what lust looks like. Loved it and hey who can deny!! Hello baby, yeah, this is the Big Bopper speaking Oh you sweet thing Do I what Will I what Oh baby you know what I like [Chorus:] Chantilly lace and a pretty face And a pony tail hanging down That wiggle in the walk and giggle in the talk Makes the world go round There ain't nothing in the world like a big eyed girl That makes me act so funny, make me spend my money Make me feel real loose like a long necked goose Like a girl, oh baby that's what I like What's that baby But, but, but, oh honey But, oh baby you know what I like [Chorus] What's that honey Pick you up at 8 and don't be late But baby I ain't got no money honey Oh alright baby you know what I like |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Haha!! Gotta love it, Eric. And I do. Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010 |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
*Removed [This message has been edited by Amaryllis (01-14-2011 11:09 PM).] |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Amaryllis, it was tongue-in-cheek. So sorry you were offended. Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010 |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
? No, not at all offended, Jerry! Sorry if I come across wrong. I was just expounding.. (I should know better!) heehee  Great writing~ Amaryllis |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
sorry i'm so late to reply...enjoyed your poem alot as well as all the comments that followed There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
No problem, faith, I appreciate your comments. Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010 |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
a tempting poem indeed great work. |
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Legacy Member
since 2011-01-08
Posts 60Louisiana |
Nice work. A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks. [This message has been edited by Legacy (01-15-2011 09:01 AM).] |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Thanks Mike and Legacy. Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010 |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good, Jerry. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Thank you Sunshine. Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010 |
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