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The Lady
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0 posted 2011-01-13 01:17 AM




today
a feather brushed my eyelid
crossed my heart  
a soft finger wrote “believe” on the air
wrapped me in the scent of rose

today
starpoint touched my hand    
led me to a wind blown tunnel  
where sun motes and shadows played

today
I heard chimes  
a pure crystal voice whispered
“I am not afraid”

today
I pondered
what words does one use
when praying
  
for an angel

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for our precious Linda

[This message has been edited by The Lady (01-13-2011 05:40 PM).]

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1 posted 2011-01-13 01:21 AM


This is perfect for our Earth Angel.  Now I am going off to write her a letter.

xoxoxo
Alison

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2 posted 2011-01-13 03:36 AM


Beautiful trbute to to everyone's favorite angel, Kate.
                               Ida

XGarapanX
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3 posted 2011-01-13 05:18 AM


Exquisite.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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4 posted 2011-01-13 06:21 AM


Lovely.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

JerryPat
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5 posted 2011-01-13 06:51 AM


Flows like a lilac-scented breeze from a soft meadow.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

Sunshine
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6 posted 2011-01-13 08:33 AM


Kate,

Linda will so enjoy these tender
loving thoughts.

It's so good to read you again!



[that other] K

faithmairee
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7 posted 2011-01-13 02:25 PM


very lovely...enjoyed!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

OwlSA
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8 posted 2011-01-13 06:13 PM


What an exquisite Kate-poem for our Linda!  You always outdo yourself, Kate.

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9 posted 2011-01-13 06:17 PM


your words are lovely and so appropriate...

"where sun motes and shadows played"

...wow, simply wow

Margherita
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10 posted 2011-01-13 06:45 PM


Your heart has just found the right words, dear Kate.

The deep closeness is felt.

Poignantly beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2011-01-13 09:11 PM


today
starpoint touched my hand    
led me to a wind blown tunnel  
where sun motes and shadows played

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This is stunning, so soft and loving, just like our Earth Angel~

Thank you Fair Lady, for sharing your big beautiful heart.

latearrival
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12 posted 2011-01-13 09:42 PM


We do not see your name here often enough but when it shows up, it is worth the wait.  Thank you for Linda,she will be greatly touched by this.latearrival
The Lady
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13 posted 2011-01-13 10:43 PM



thank you all so much
I pray our Angel will soon be
up and about and we will see
her name here too.

ethome
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14 posted 2011-01-14 02:31 AM


I know it's all been said/written in the comments above but I stop to say what a wonderful expression of depth and appreciation.

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

The Lady
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15 posted 2011-01-14 08:41 AM




thank you Eric.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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16 posted 2011-01-14 08:59 AM


What a delicate and delightful poem.
Lori

The Lady
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17 posted 2011-01-14 09:09 AM




thank you Lori.

Dark Stranger
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18 posted 2011-01-14 10:45 AM


lady1

praying for an angel is something special...almost like helping god..enjoyed your tender here ms

The Lady
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19 posted 2011-01-14 10:50 AM




thank you Stranger darlin...

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20 posted 2011-01-16 08:08 PM


a tribute most fine!
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