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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-12 02:35 PM


sleep caresses me
softly, slowly
cradling my unconscious-


i fight it but
delight in it-
the memory of your face


my lips taste
of your sweet love
and the warmth of your breath


sleep comes over me
the kiss still warm-
still heavy on my lips

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-01-12 02:57 PM


Sweet!
Lori

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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2 posted 2011-01-12 03:59 PM


simply beautiful
JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
3 posted 2011-01-12 06:51 PM


Yes indeed. When it is that good the world stops for a moment.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2011-01-12 07:30 PM


darn collies always kiss ya when you are sawing logs..grin...smooth stuff ms
faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
5 posted 2011-01-12 08:04 PM


Lori-Thanks as always for your comments.

steavenr-Thanks so much!

JerryPat-You grasped the entire reason for my having written this poem.  Thanks, my friend.

Dark Stranger-Yep, I've got my grin on.  Love that imagination of yours! Glad you enjoyed my little poem.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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