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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-12 12:33 PM

they look like
they're flirting
(it isn't right)
but then i
have no claims
on the man

their laughter
(innocent or not)
discourages me
forcing me to feel
i n s i g n i f i c a n t

perhaps i
protest too much
but darn it all
those precious eyes
of his did court me
for a while

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-01-12 12:54 PM

I can relate. I like this!
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-01-12 01:51 PM

Thank you, Lori. I'm happy you like it.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2011-01-12 02:05 PM

Well Faith, I'll tell you what I'll do.
I'll hold the ungrateful son of a gun because he left you for another and you can poke him right in those precious eyes....KerSMUCK!!

Make ya feel better, honest!

Aw jus kiddin, I think, I enjoyed the point of this.

Eric

Siamese twins move to England so the other one can learn how to drive!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-01-12 03:54 PM

enjoyed...(loved how you stressed the word, 'insignificant')

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-01-12 06:52 PM

Thank you Eric and steavenr

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

6 posted 2011-01-12 06:53 PM

We can get ourselves charged up over a fleeting glance, and when that glance shifts to another it can be tough to accept that we were just in his/her line of vision and we read more into it than was actually there. I have been there. Done that.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-01-12 07:04 PM

you are so right, my friend...thanks for your comments...i always enjoy what you have to say

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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