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Love is not Jealous
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Love is not Jealous |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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It says love is not jealous. So what is this I feel for you that I envy those that can share conversations about times and places that don’t concern me… and make you laugh LGR©1/12/11 |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Ah, Lori...this is so gently and beautifully expressed...i have felt this before...your poem reminds me a bit of my poem "precious eyes" that i am getting ready to post...i would love to know what you think of it! i enjoyed your poem so much! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Really good point Lori and I like the way you put it here. One of those things we all have affect us isn't it? Along with those deep feelings comes that he/she is my love and I should be the main focus of attention most of the time Especially when we love a person, sheesh, bedamned if we do and bedamned if we don't. Youse is a clever little gal! Eric Siamese twins move to England so the other one can learn how to drive! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ahhh...love aches...nice write, thoroughly enjoyed |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Faith, Eric and Steven- I'm glad you found this little piece worthwhile. Thanks for checking it out! Lori |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Hah! Who says love is not jealous? I'd like to talk to that person. How can you not be jealous if you are in love. Jealousy, taken to the extreme is an awful thing to see, but jealousy will always be there watching and waiting. Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Aah! Human love is MOST jealous, I think. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry & XGarapanX-yes, we want to be the everything to the one we love but that is impossible as they have to have their own to be who they are. It is a catch 22. Lori |
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