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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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Wyoming USA

0 posted 2011-01-11 11:43 PM



Lay with me,
Through passions times
Exploring moments,
of soft caress

Yes... Lay with me,
Let our bodies meld together
Let our souls create beauty
of lifes desire...


© Copyright 2011 Richard Konkler - All Rights Reserved
faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-01-11 11:49 PM


this is really beautiful...nice work!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY
2 posted 2011-01-12 07:34 AM


Soft and sensual. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2011-01-12 07:51 AM


Sensuous emotions generated here for sure.

Good work!

Eric

Siamese twins move to England so the other one can learn how to drive!

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
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4 posted 2011-01-12 10:42 AM


The grandness and personal tributes such as this never go without response. Nice work.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

bb88
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since 2011-01-12
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West Virginia
5 posted 2011-01-12 11:38 AM


this is beautiful... good work...

Bill Bradley

Bill Bradley

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