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Legacy
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since 2011-01-08
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Louisiana

0 posted 2011-01-11 09:30 PM


Rain coming down hard
Free from fear I run naked
Into my future.

A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks.

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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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1 posted 2011-01-11 10:00 PM


I think I can relate to that.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
2 posted 2011-01-11 10:03 PM


wow...this is very profound for being a small poem...i love the way you said so much is so few words....great job!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Legacy
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since 2011-01-08
Posts 60
Louisiana
3 posted 2011-01-11 10:17 PM


Thanks, JerryPat.

faithmairee, I am happy you found some worth in my senryu.

A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks.

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