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Legacy
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0 posted 2011-01-11 10:27 AM


Look into yourself
Would you buy what you can see
Heartbreaks are for sale.

A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-01-11 10:34 AM


Are they cheaper by the dozen? Good write
Lori

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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2 posted 2011-01-11 11:10 AM


Me and my reflection don't get along...one of us is a liar....but I'm not sure who Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

Legacy
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3 posted 2011-01-11 11:30 AM


I might be able to make a sale out of a dozen heartbreaks, and still have a few left over, Lori.

Trina, I absolutely understand where you are coming from. Thank you for understanding where I am coming from.

A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks.

faithmairee
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4 posted 2011-01-11 10:26 PM


a profound and thought-provoking poem....i love it!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Balladeer
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5 posted 2011-01-11 10:34 PM


I looked for myself
In the eyes of all my friends
Couldn't find me there.

Legacy
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since 2011-01-08
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6 posted 2011-01-12 06:27 AM


faith, I thank you for your nice thoughts.

That is a lonesome feeling, Balladeer, and thanks for the understanding.

A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks.

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