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faithmairee
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0 posted 2011-01-10 09:51 PM



gentlemen, have a heart
and please---
don't start something you
can't complete

for a woman can know
what your
eyes clearly show
and mistake this for
something she needs

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2011-01-10 10:26 PM




Brava!


faithmairee
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2 posted 2011-01-10 10:30 PM


thank ya, thank ya, thank ya (humbly bows)

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

mikeandrew
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3 posted 2011-01-11 12:30 PM


wonderful rhythm in your work.
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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4 posted 2011-01-11 04:05 AM


Eh, I learnt to not make the mistake of assuming a man has something I need. ha. Guess that kinda makes me the one who needs a heart Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

ethome
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5 posted 2011-01-11 07:41 AM


Faith

This has quite a twist to it. I enjoyed the idea.
Yep, have a heart, much needed, you're gonna know.

Eric

Siamese twins move to England so the other one can learn how to drive!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-01-11 08:17 AM


Telling it like it is!
Lori

JerryPat
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7 posted 2011-01-11 09:17 AM


Ah, the game of life and love, we never seem to get it right, do we, faith? Well, not often.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

steavenr
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8 posted 2011-01-11 04:17 PM


brevity, wisdom, and sage advice...they make a nice package...well done...enjoyed
latearrival
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9 posted 2011-01-11 09:11 PM


A good reminder to  all the guys who need reminding. latearrival
faithmairee
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10 posted 2011-01-11 09:53 PM


thank you so much for all of your wonderful remarks...you made my day!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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