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Elric
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0 posted 01-10-2011 08:57 PM       View Profile for Elric   Email Elric   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elric


I go to bed only for my dreams.

In dreams everything is right.

Its the perfect world.

I never want to wake up.

It feel so right with you there.

Reality comes flooding back with being awake.

I lay there for hours.

Wishing I could escape back into that magical place.

Always wishing.

I go through the day, waiting for the night.

When I can escape again,

To that wonderful place.

Only possible in a dream.

© Copyright 2011 Zackery A. Sanders - All Rights Reserved
faithmairee
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1 posted 01-10-2011 09:35 PM       View Profile for faithmairee   Email faithmairee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit faithmairee's Home Page   View IP for faithmairee

i know how this feels and i could feel the emotion in your words...a sad and moving poem!


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

mikeandrew
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2 posted 01-11-2011 12:41 AM       View Profile for mikeandrew   Email mikeandrew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mikeandrew

i like your poem very much.
ethome
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3 posted 01-11-2011 02:40 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

You've written the emotions of a love not returned exceptionally well.
Enjoyable read.

Eric
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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Agat, Guam


4 posted 01-11-2011 04:15 AM       View Profile for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Email s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit s1nfully_1nn0c3nt's Home Page   View IP for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt

Ah, but be wary of nightmares. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

Spiros Zafiris
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5 posted 01-11-2011 04:24 AM       View Profile for Spiros Zafiris   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spiros Zafiris

..>>quite clear and entertaining; i enjoyed
reading your poem..>>spiros
l'artiste
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6 posted 01-20-2012 12:08 PM       View Profile for l'artiste   Email l'artiste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for l'artiste

I very much enjoyed this poem it is well written, I often feel this way.
JerryPat2
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7 posted 01-20-2012 12:30 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

I hear you, Elric, reality is a bummer sometimes.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Michael
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8 posted 01-20-2012 05:17 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

"An idle longing, night and day
To dream my very life away."

I believe that's how Poe described it.  I know well the felling.

Michael
jwesley
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since 04-30-2000
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Texas . . .


9 posted 01-21-2012 11:30 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Dreams are nice aren't they, but in my mind, living for dreams is a loss of the reality I could have . . . reality being more stressed and harder to accomplish, but more wonderful in the end.

Enjoyed, my friend,

j.
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


10 posted 01-23-2012 11:16 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

How well I understand! Reality keeps interfering with life as I'd like it... only found in slumber or daydreams. Great write!
 
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