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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
shoulder-shadows lengthen o’er the cobblestone lane filling rejoining joinders with warm, starlit night dancing to the essence of love’s singular rose welcoming the touch of strength’s embrace night-nectars enhancing lovers star-stretched over the ne’er circling orbit of amore soft-dressed while moonbeams fall like feathers faintly wearing the smiles of gods and goddesses undressing the hearts of nurtured romance while shoulder-shadows lengthen into love’s late night |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
wow...this is so romantic...i love it...awesome imagery! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
oops, you caught me, Faithm...wrote this watching "Only You" on a cold wintry day when the picture froze showing footsteps on a cobblestone avenue...and yes, feeling a bit romantic  |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I agree with Faith, This has awesome imagery, and it is indeed, a romantic write. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice! Softly romantic and seductively serene. Good work! Eric |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
uh huh!! ditto ditto!! Ejoyed this romantic piece very much. Lori |
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