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deep drifts |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
visages peer through piercings of snow meandering slow through passages of time flakes foundering with facets aglow ice crystals dance in the friezes of rhyme gently resting among cradles and crescents proclaiming aloud with the voice of a mime wafting aloft to its supernal prescience insightful enlightenment to heaven’s floe marching slow ere passing’s presence drifts deep drifts in the meadow of the soul |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love that last line Steaven! Haven't read any of your work for a while but I now remember how I enjoyed it. Beautiful metaphors all written in the King's finest english. Meadow Of The Soul ....hummm... there's some song material in there somewhere. Good stuff! Eric |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I appreciate your style very much. Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i too like your style...nice work on this one! faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Eric, thank you and as far as the song, go for it…I would love to listen to your creativity Lori, thank you…that is so very nice of you faithm, I really do like your comments…thank you  |
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