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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2011-01-09 10:03 PM



Sonja


Wasn't she an angel
sent from heaven

to turn frowns
upside down,

to spread smiles
and happiness
around?


JamesLee
08January
2011


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JerryPat
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1 posted 2011-01-09 10:36 PM


Sounds like my kind of angel. Nice.

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Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2011-01-10 01:44 AM


..simple but that's why it is
very good..simplicity reigns..>>spiros

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3 posted 2011-01-10 02:04 AM


You have a fan in me.

A

ethome
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4 posted 2011-01-10 11:53 AM


Yes, very well reasoned James

An angel!

Eric

XGarapanX
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5 posted 2011-01-10 07:12 PM


I really like these simple, well spoken poems. Great work!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2011-01-13 06:55 PM


Thank you Jerry, Spiros, Alison, ethome and XGarapanX for the wonderful responses...James
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