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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-01-09 05:41 PM



IÕm not going to let you go
Until this ride says so

You know that man
Standing to the far left outside the park,
HeÕs not the one for you

His words donÕt mean
What the heart truly yearns for

You know that little star
You use to pray to,
It isnÕt for you,
The meaning of your thoughts
CanÕt subscribe to the things you want

You see itÕs going to be a long ride from here
I canÕt say if itÕs going to be easy
The night has a way of making you feel alone
But I know itÕs going to be OK

I hope you live through the snow
So your thoughts can rise to the spring
Where IÕll be waiting for you

This is going to be a long ride
The Chevy truck wonÕt last forever
Just donÕt forget your tears

For the night, you know,
Well, you know how that dance goes

© Copyright 2011 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
1 posted 2011-01-16 12:19 PM


This is an awesome poem. I like the way you let your feelings flow. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2011-01-16 10:29 PM


Thanks, Doctor...happy I could bring a smile to your face.

Cheers

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