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Open Poetry #47

becoming the bait

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

0 posted 2011-01-09 02:19 PM

Is it better or not to shield thyself from loves hooks
to be hung like a goose as the prize, to be paraded
about in silk shirts dazzled in colors like a peacock,
or to be confined to one bed with her in command.
Then she passes by with that liquefaction of her clothes
revealing her shapely form, when the moon light strikes
just right mesmerizing ,seducing my eyes and heart
I then willingly become the bait.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-01-09 02:26 PM

intriguing poem very nicely constructed

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2011-01-09 02:43 PM

Aw, don't we all, Mike, don't we all.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2011-01-11 04:33 PM

..indeed; takes one back..well versed

..>>spiros

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