our fate was to part - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #47

our fate was to part

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-09 01:13 PM

i do not speak
nor dream of you
seldom do i
think of you
but when i see you
my mind is schemeing
my heart is bleeding
and i am praying
my eyes won't betray me
for my temptation
is so great

for a moment
i long for
your tender embrace
for a moment
i long to touch
your sweet face
for a moment i think of
your warm lips on mine
as lastly i dream
of our bodies entwined

then i remember
the lies you so
frequently told
ah, i remember
the nights and how
they grew cold
i think of
the pain that
pierced through
my heart
your love was like poison
and our fate was to part

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

incwrite
Member

since 2010-12-31

Posts 55
new york

1 posted 2011-01-09 02:03 PM

that's a wow. I could feel your pain.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-01-09 02:05 PM

ah, thanks so much for reading and responding to my poem...i appreciate that!

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

3 posted 2011-01-09 02:29 PM

very nice rhythm in your poem enjoyed reading your work.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-01-09 02:34 PM

thank you very much...i enjoyed yours as well

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-01-09 04:52 PM

Great job, well done!
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-01-09 05:09 PM

Thanks so much, Lori. I appreciate your wonderful comments.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2011-01-13 06:58 PM

Nice...to live in a lie is not a true relationship...James

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

8 posted 2011-01-13 07:56 PM

so true....thanks for your wonderful remarks

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.