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Open Poetry #47

star light

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

0 posted 2011-01-09 08:47 AM

come to me in the dark of night .
oh magic star light shine upon
my dreams tonight keep me safe
from darkness fears that pierce
my soul with images of grave stones,
that rise out from the dark of night.
I tremble at this imagery implanted
in my mind to speak the dreams of far
off tongues that haunt my eternal sleep,
and chain me to this boundless place,
with in my own demented mind a prison,
i build with a tiny hole to let the magic star
light shine upon my dreams and keep me safe.

[This message has been edited by mikeandrew (01-09-2011 09:39 AM).]

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

1 posted 2011-01-09 09:24 AM

Fascinating poem and I love the way you write!!

Marti

I do the <color=orange><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-01-09 10:43 AM

Your being conscious of the power of star light will keep you safe and sound.

Graves, symbols of death, are not the places where souls dwell, but sometimes such fearful thoughts can haunt us, it is true.

Intense write.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2011-01-09 09:55 PM

Enjoyed...James

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

4 posted 2011-01-09 10:41 PM

From tiny pinpoint of hole you can visualize the world and you are never alone. Nice work.

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2011-01-10 12:06 PM

Love this perspective Mike.

It's a wonderful crossover expression.

Good writing!

Eric

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