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faithmairee
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0 posted 2011-01-09 01:01 AM



if a woman is likened to
a water glass in a man's eye
to be picked up and sipped from
when the notion hits him
women stay dry

men are the water well
brimming with power
always somewhere else
attending to the important matters
content to dole out their attention
like momma did her lumpy mashed potatoes

sometimes women need a little
space too to be alone
to gather their thoughts and
mostly men do return to
their thirst quenching wife-lover-friend

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2011-01-09 02:16 AM


one would think this type of relationship would crumble

lots to think about

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2011-01-09 02:27 AM


I like it.  Glad that I don't live it, but I like it.

A

Bastet
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3 posted 2011-01-09 04:04 AM


A very interesting perspective on man-woman relationships. A well-crafted poem.
XGarapanX
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4 posted 2011-01-09 05:16 AM


Definitely a different perspective from any I am used to.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Legacy
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5 posted 2011-01-09 05:49 AM


Is this to replace the "Metro Man," Faith? Just curious.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-01-11 08:32 AM


I follow your thinking here and see the truth in it and I agree with Rex.
Lori

faithmairee
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7 posted 2011-01-13 03:24 PM


thank you aff for your comments...somehow, i missed replying on this one...i'm sorry  and thanks again for responding

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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