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faithmairee
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0 posted 2011-01-08 11:48 PM



to return to center stage again
i'd repeat that worn-out lie
to relive the warmth and pleasure
i would sulk, pout and cry

i would have preferred a gentle hand
with an occasional pat on the back
but rather than get indifference
i learned it was good to be bad

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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Legacy
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since 2011-01-08
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1 posted 2011-01-09 07:08 AM


Hahaha!! Tellin' it like it is.
XGarapanX
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2 posted 2011-01-09 08:15 AM


Sweet. A little sassy.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Margherita
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3 posted 2011-01-09 11:20 AM


Indifference hurts, no doubt, some strategies may help, but there might be some bitter aftertaste ...


You write well.

Margherita

faithmairee
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4 posted 2011-01-09 12:27 PM


many thnaks for your comments on my poem...i appreciate them so much!

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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