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Open Poetry #47

The Sands of Corona

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2011-01-08 01:06 PM

Document5, or so it says
On the canvass of my soul
Strangely aligned, I confess
Like queries on a wearisome poll

Begging answers to illuminate
Recesses that fold themselves
Onto themselves as I ruminate
Where my mind fears to tread nor e/en delves

Bound in chains to the gigs of tetra
No longer upon the sands of corona
And thoughts as ancient as the corners of my mind
Relive, rehash, and remember the same of a diff/rent kind

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-01-08 01:12 PM

a profound and thought-provoking poem very well penned...nice work!

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2011-01-08 02:23 PM

This is good.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-01-08 02:56 PM

No longer upon the sands of corona
And thoughts as ancient as the corners of my mind
Relive, rehash, and remember the same of a diff/rent kind
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Nice lines~

So very good to read you again, steavnr~

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-01-08 03:12 PM

faith, thanks for your kind remarks

XG, 'preciate it

Blues, thank you...it is good to be back...needed my mind to work before I could come back

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-01-08 03:16 PM

I like the way you think!
Lori

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2011-01-08 03:22 PM

Very interesting and well presented.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2011-01-11 10:16 PM

Lori, and I like the way you reply...thank you for taking the time to read and comment

Eric, thanks...glad you found it interesting...thanks for the generous reply

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