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Open Poetry #47

nowhere to run

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-01-07 05:24 PM

I didnÕt want her to be,
I donÕt know
She was the dare of the day
The sun said I should take her for a ride

For a woman she was
But her feet were shoeless,
I wanted her to be standing as tall
As he mother use to
Standing at the top of the stairs
With her hair down,
Heels, black with sensitivity

I wanted her
To be the shameless serenade of my dreams
The conversation of the morning ease

I wanted her to be,
I donÕt know,
An absolute truth
But the farther I see her
I see her eyes
Like the sea holds onto the tides
That hit the rocks each morning
She comes to the edge

These games
For what,
Your honest cheeks
CanÕt hide your lips anymore

You canÕt hide the drift
Of the doors creak, anymore.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

1 posted 2011-01-16 12:23 PM

Another awesome poem. I love the way you ended this poem.

i enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2011-01-16 10:08 PM

an interesting and insightful write...found this phrase so enchanting:

"I wanted her
To be the shameless serenade of my dreams
The conversation of the morning ease"

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2011-01-16 10:28 PM

Thanks Doctor and Steve, happy you enjoyed...take care

Cheers

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