Blind Mirrors - The Echo of a Whisper

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Open Poetry #47

Blind Mirrors - The Echo of a Whisper

blankmirrors
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since 2010-07-16

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0 posted 2011-01-07 10:26 AM

Our words
Translate the mother tongue of our life
Into a foreign language.

In the sleepless land of words
We dismember our pain.
Then, like gods,
We compose it again.
--from Blind Mirrors: Echo of a Whisper

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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

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Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2011-01-07 10:34 AM

beautiful thought provoking piece

enjoyed

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

2 posted 2011-01-07 10:50 AM

Wow, yea what a grand entrance you've made. Fine writing, indeed. I'm looking forward to more.

Welcome to the blue sea~

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19

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Antarctica

3 posted 2011-01-07 11:24 AM

Fantastic writing, no doubt about it.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

JDH
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since 2009-03-29

Posts 12
Illinois, U.S.

4 posted 2011-01-07 12:05 PM

interesting concept...also, not over told (like i would do)..good stuff

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-01-07 02:42 PM

short and to the point...a finely penned poem

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

[This message has been edited by faithmairee (01-08-2011 11:34 AM).]

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2011-01-08 10:48 AM

This is rather intriguing, a piece to ponder over. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

When you decide to walk away- walk away. Don't look back, In that moment you'll lose trust and faith- in yourself.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2011-01-08 05:09 PM

...sweet...loved this:

"In the sleepless land of words
We dismember our pain"

brevity is the essence of clarity

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