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DrinaLove
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since 2010-12-23
Posts 30
California

0 posted 2011-01-06 08:57 PM


Been seen and observed, over reacted to what I've acted
Critique to an extend that might not be met
The questions have arisen but the answers are not clasping
To the conclusions they've made, nothing makes sense
I tell you today what I was once yesterday
Opinions and reviews you've all seen and heard, with never ending comments
This world, the main report
Ask me, for my opinion does not matter, it has not been accounted for
The fact sheet is all near, to your reach but can't escort
Scattered with facts, what I want for you all
The access to the exclusive I have, in my mouth I obtain
A statastic that only I can make, the fact to what hasn't been proven yet
Not my theory but a made solution to the nonsense
The clasp to all the questions, a seat to all that have risen
Comfort I bring to those with confusion indeed, to the wandering eyes
Just lay it, lay them on, that's all I want
I assure you that for once
You'll see, but only with eyes on me

© Copyright 2011 Adriana Roybal - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2011-01-06 11:02 PM


Very interesting writing Adriana
Many unique lines to ponder and tie together.
Well presented reasoning.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

DrinaLove
Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30
California
2 posted 2011-01-06 11:48 PM


thank u.
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2011-01-07 06:52 AM


feels like an explosion is ready to be born...please continue this...
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
4 posted 2011-01-07 07:07 AM


I don't have much to say except, wowzers!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

DrinaLove
Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30
California
5 posted 2011-01-07 07:35 PM


Thnx u guys but this wasn't written out of frustation or anything
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