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Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2011-01-05 11:07 PM

~~~
In days to come
from others hearts
their thoughts and troubles tell

Conveyed to ear
from deepest parts
they reach to dip their quill

There may perchance
like deja vu
some recollection be

From ember smolder
deep in you
a thought that speaks of me

~

When sunshine's healing folds embrace
the tears
within your cries

Then soothes you in its gentle grace
shares dreams
within your eyes

When happy smiles escort your thoughts
twill set your spirit free

For just that instant

Through time forgot

Perhaps
you'll think of me
~~~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-01-05 11:35 PM

good diction and a nice flow to your words...i enjoyed this poem alot...very nicely written

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-01-06 01:31 AM

I am becoming quite the fan of your poetry.

A

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2011-01-06 06:22 AM

I, too, have the same feelings about certain people. We don't want to be lost in history's unfeeling memories.

~ Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to,
which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010 ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-01-06 08:27 AM

What a sweet and loving poem that warms the heart

Lori

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

5 posted 2011-01-06 08:29 AM

Ah, Beautiful. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

When you decide to walk away- walk away. Don't look back, In that moment you'll lose trust and faith- in yourself.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2011-01-06 01:47 PM

A lovely heartfelt write that touches the readers heart! Well done!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2011-01-06 01:53 PM

Beautifully done Rex!

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2011-01-06 02:39 PM

attending the tender...enjoyed your soft touch Rex..

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

9 posted 2011-05-10 01:04 AM

Enjoyed...

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