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vandana
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0 posted 2011-01-05 05:54 PM




Day Begins
As I sit
Next to window
I watch the sunrise
I also watch birds sing
As my heart rings
While I am thinking of the times
Where my heart was in love
Listen to the birds softly
To my window
I feel my heart beat fast
As I recall the past
Of my memory
I sit quietly
Whispering the words of love
To my heart
I feel so close to my home
Where I left behind
As day begins softly
With a birds singing
Where my heart ringing

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-01-05 07:19 PM


You are the love, Vandana...
and you write beautifully of it.


JerryPat
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2 posted 2011-01-05 07:32 PM


Nostalgia is a heartfelt emotion, sometimes good, other times . . .

~ Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to,
which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010 ~

ethome
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3 posted 2011-01-05 10:21 PM


Very nice expression of upbeat feelings Vandana

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

Alison
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4 posted 2011-01-06 01:21 AM


Yes, you write of "beauty and love" ... beautifully.

Alison

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2011-01-08 05:55 PM


A pleasure...James
XGarapanX
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6 posted 2011-01-08 10:50 PM


Definitely a whisper of home.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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