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bending of yachtless bottles

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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 12-31-2009 02:47 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

    

mistress of tomorrow's smoking bay
bend my mind around your sea hems
and tempt me with the tall sigh sails
of your siren song fragility

dash my panting will into those minutes
against the soft sided bosom
of your coexistant eternity
and blush my leather in your lather

to tempt me with your tide swallows
as you feel my splintered dreams
with the tips of your fingers
let me prick your deepest viscosity

with our rapture of sand castle memories


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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 12-31-2009 06:43 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I don't think I could pick a favorite line or group of lines... I just know I welcome the read of every one. *S*

Beautiful work, D... Happy New Year!!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


2 posted 12-31-2009 06:49 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

of your coexistant eternity
and blush my leather in your lather

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See see, there goes your sigh ways again!!

and cheers to the sandcastle memories too!!

*tease*
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3 posted 12-31-2009 07:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Stranger, the title alone is worth the price of admission....the poem compliments it well.
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 01-01-2010 06:45 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms suthern,, thanks lady for the eyes...


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ms bluezy, did you say tease?  meet for coffee and teas?  thanks special lady..


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Balladeer...humble thanks amigo, I appreciate your reviews.
Margherita
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Eternity


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quote:
mistress of tomorrow's smoking bay
bend my mind around your sea hems
and tempt me with the tall sigh sails
of your siren song fragility

dash my panting will into those minutes
against the soft sided bosom
of your coexistant eternity
and blush my leather in your lather

to tempt me with your tide swallows
as you feel my splintered dreams
with the tips of your fingers
let me prick your deepest viscosity

with our rapture of sand castle memories




Totally amazing and fascinating in text and picture, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita
ebonygirl
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6 posted 10-02-2011 03:32 PM       View Profile for ebonygirl   Email ebonygirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ebonygirl

Very nice Mr. D
ms. e
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