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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-12-30 12:33 PM



she returned again with that tuesday dawn
high heels on the morning side of her holidays
like a fiji dream with sun warmed waterfalls

laughter whispered as glances from her eyes
lady tree limbs were goose flesh inspiration
like from the brim of recognition perhaps

when the woman of her mind went dancing
and the rocking shoe men quietly worshiped
with glances they would spend like prayers

or was it just the chill of being a woman
when the man trees stirred in their wind
and were of sudden smitten by her sky ways

when she was some velvet color of lovely


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daark



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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-12-30 02:29 PM


A "velvet" sky to complement your "velvet" words...

Wishing you all the best in 2010,

EA

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SlowlyFallAway
Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279
North Carolina
2 posted 2009-12-30 03:17 PM


I like how you created men inside of nature. Amazingly creative.
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2009-12-30 08:07 PM


Smitten by your sigh ways is more like it!!

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laughter whispered as glances from her eyes
lady tree limbs were goose flesh inspiration
like from the brim of recognition perhaps
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Your writing is like peppermint candy, it is just too cool and makes me tingle all over.

Happy New Year hugs and lovies,  big guy!!

noman
Junior Member
since 2009-12-26
Posts 18

4 posted 2009-12-30 08:35 PM


This is really good.
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2009-12-31 02:15 PM


ms EA, thank you much lady friend..have a wonderful new year.

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SlowlyFallAway, thank you for the eyes and touch...

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ms bluezy, thank you tingleskinlady..have a happy new year and keep on smiling babe

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noman, thank you and welcome to the pipzoo

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2010-01-21 03:20 PM


quote:
she returned again with that tuesday dawn
high heels on the morning side of her holidays
like a fiji dream with sun warmed waterfalls

laughter whispered as glances from her eyes
lady tree limbs were goose flesh inspiration
like from the brim of recognition perhaps

when the woman of her mind went dancing
and the rocking shoe men quietly worshiped
with glances they would spend like prayers

or was it just the chill of being a woman
when the man trees stirred in their wind
and were of sudden smitten by her sky ways

when she was some velvet color of lovely




Yes, "gooseflesh inspiration"! You are a wonder.

And you are so much missed!

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2010-01-21 08:56 PM


there is always something about
water, words, and whispers
that make some moments endless.

Photos help.



Well done, Sir.

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