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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 12-30-2009 12:33 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


she returned again with that tuesday dawn
high heels on the morning side of her holidays
like a fiji dream with sun warmed waterfalls

laughter whispered as glances from her eyes
lady tree limbs were goose flesh inspiration
like from the brim of recognition perhaps

when the woman of her mind went dancing
and the rocking shoe men quietly worshiped
with glances they would spend like prayers

or was it just the chill of being a woman
when the man trees stirred in their wind
and were of sudden smitten by her sky ways

when she was some velvet color of lovely


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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


1 posted 12-30-2009 02:29 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

A "velvet" sky to complement your "velvet" words...

Wishing you all the best in 2010,

EA

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SlowlyFallAway
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2 posted 12-30-2009 03:17 PM       View Profile for SlowlyFallAway   Email SlowlyFallAway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SlowlyFallAway

I like how you created men inside of nature. Amazingly creative.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


3 posted 12-30-2009 08:07 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Smitten by your sigh ways is more like it!!

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laughter whispered as glances from her eyes
lady tree limbs were goose flesh inspiration
like from the brim of recognition perhaps
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Your writing is like peppermint candy, it is just too cool and makes me tingle all over.

Happy New Year hugs and lovies,  big guy!!
noman
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4 posted 12-30-2009 08:35 PM       View Profile for noman   Email noman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for noman

This is really good.
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 12-31-2009 02:15 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms EA, thank you much lady friend..have a wonderful new year.

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SlowlyFallAway, thank you for the eyes and touch...

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ms bluezy, thank you tingleskinlady..have a happy new year and keep on smiling babe

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noman, thank you and welcome to the pipzoo
Margherita
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Eternity


6 posted 01-21-2010 03:20 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
she returned again with that tuesday dawn
high heels on the morning side of her holidays
like a fiji dream with sun warmed waterfalls

laughter whispered as glances from her eyes
lady tree limbs were goose flesh inspiration
like from the brim of recognition perhaps

when the woman of her mind went dancing
and the rocking shoe men quietly worshiped
with glances they would spend like prayers

or was it just the chill of being a woman
when the man trees stirred in their wind
and were of sudden smitten by her sky ways

when she was some velvet color of lovely




Yes, "gooseflesh inspiration"! You are a wonder.

And you are so much missed!

Love,
Margherita
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


7 posted 01-21-2010 08:56 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

there is always something about
water, words, and whispers
that make some moments endless.

Photos help.



Well done, Sir.
 
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