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Zeigeist
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an old worn tree branch
stretches low to the river
children laugh and play

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2islander2
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by the sea


1 posted 12-30-2009 09:38 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

nice atmosphere, a vivid expression of art.

have a nice day

yann
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Realms of Light


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Vivid visual ~ and audio!

A very pleasant scenario!


EA
Earl Brinkman
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A nicely written haiku with a vivid description.
 
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