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For a Little Star

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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 12-29-2009 11:58 AM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Chalmette Guy

There in the nighttime sky
I behold a little lonely star
Where my thoughts of love reside
Held aloft and brighter by far
Ever the steady guiding light
For a traveler through the storm
How can something in the cold of night
Be so distant, yet ever so warm
No jewels upon Earth can measure
Nor even be held in any compare
For God so values this treasure
In Heaven she will forever shine there

Such a beautiful little star in the envious sky
I shield her radiance from my undeserving eyes
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viking_metal
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1 posted 12-29-2009 12:07 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

clever little....


good write.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

The Lady
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2 posted 12-29-2009 09:24 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


beautiful work!
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 12-30-2009 08:10 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

The soft light never shined so bright.

Your heart is a gentle and loving one, guy!!
SlowlyFallAway
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4 posted 12-31-2009 11:05 AM       View Profile for SlowlyFallAway   Email SlowlyFallAway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SlowlyFallAway

You could be undeserving ... or you could be looking at the wrong star.

Nice write.
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 01-01-2010 12:35 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

I've read this a few times.  Your softer side shines bright.  Happy New Year!
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