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Cranberry Red
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Cranberry Red |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Cranberry Red Surely, the sweet of my tongue has left its fragrance Moistening this envelope over wishes warm Where I placed soft swells of snow in festive scenery Just as lightly as the sift of winter falls upon a frosted window The scent of a crowded kitchen, bakery air and stunning surprise By background music of jostling pots, laughter lights the room For now, parchment may prevail these wishes, so certain of their steadfast gleam Simple, in their happiness and harmony all around you So might the taste of my verse stay near you, blending smile with symmetry Against the plain white wrapper, where I lay my heart Then know, as surely as my fingers meet my mind, my wishes here be said And last upon the ending line, is sealed with a kiss, cranberry red Copyright Kkh 12/26/09 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most pleasant seasonally impressionistic write ... fine imagery ... I especially love the line: "The scent of a crowded kitchen, bakery air and stunning surprise..." applause for this 'penning' ! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Brings back the years that have passed. nicely done. latearrival |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely done  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yahooooie.........smoocharoooie.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD, your poem has me smiling from the inside out! An exceptionally pleasing read to experience and savour! Lovely beyond words! ~ at least beyond my words! lol May 2010 be a year of beauty and bountiful blessings!   Linda www.lindadowd.com |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
And a sweet kiss I am sure it is. Lovely. zeitgeist |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
..."And last upon the ending line, is sealed with a kiss, cranberry red..." Ah, here where mine what to sample the promosied flavor...well done my friend... j. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
nobody does it like you do it TD |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Oh to dream of a kiss sealed as such. You do know I am your #1 fan right? |
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