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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-12-27 10:00 PM


Santa Came to Town

Broke out my old pickup truck
cause I heard Santa was coming to town,
painted it red and cleaned the inside up
so I could show this guy named Santa around.
Wasn't sure how or where to meet him
so I drove up to the North Shore,
there I found me a bunch of reindeer
right in front of my girlfriends door.
There was even one that looked just like Rudolph
with a substantial shiny red nose,
possible from drinking too much wine
well who really knows.
For some reason they were all
hooked up to a sleigh
so I parked my old pickup truck
right in front of my girlfriends house
jumped into the sleigh and rode away.
Didn't get too far
when I heard the horn of
my old pickup truck,
some chunky guy with a
red suit and hat and a
white beard was following me
pedel to the metal,
desperately trying to catch up.

JamesLee
27December
2009

Hope everyone had a
Merry Christmas.





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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2009-12-29 12:45 PM




really cute James!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2009-12-29 09:12 AM


A shame more haven't read this yet James, so let's bump it back to the top....

Really CUTE!  Nice, refreshing take on an ancient subject....

much enjoyed...

j.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-12-29 06:43 PM


Thank you Lady and jwesley for the wonderful responses...James
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