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2islander2
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by the sea


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Icebergs sneak
inside her head,
not easy to navigate
without risking to wreck.
To observe the horizon,
to live on the starboard beam,
to change of course,
to turn to port side,
it is sometimes better
to come back to the port
and to abandon the hope
that she loves you,
then to savor stars.
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Marchmadness
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1 posted 12-27-2009 03:37 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

You sound like a wise man, yann.
                             Ida
2islander2
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2 posted 12-27-2009 03:53 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Thanks Ida, we have to take care sometimes about our sentiments and thoughts. Thanks for the read and comment.

have a nice day

yann
secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 12-27-2009 12:51 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

a fine, thoughtful 'write' ...

particularly the ending:

"it is sometimes better
  to come back to the port
  and to abandon the hope
  that she loves you,
  then to savor stars."

applause for this 'penning' !
The Lady
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4 posted 12-29-2009 09:26 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



beautiful and seaworthy!
2islander2
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5 posted 12-30-2009 09:28 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Thanks Seconhandreamer for your supportive and kind comment.

best wishes

yann
2islander2
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6 posted 12-30-2009 09:28 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Hi Lady, loved your comment.

best wishes

yann
Earth Angel
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I suppose I'm a hopeless romantic who prefers to see love among the stars than to return to a port to face reality.

Who knows, perhaps in 2010 the icebergs will melt within her head ~ and her heart!

Wishing you all the best in the new year!

Linda


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SlowlyFallAway
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Maybe that's me. Nice write.
therightside
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9 posted 12-30-2009 05:33 PM       View Profile for therightside   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for therightside

I like this It's light and has a great feeling when read!
2islander2
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10 posted 01-01-2010 11:07 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Yes Linda, thanks for the supportive comments, I have the same hopes and your comment has such kindness.

yann
2islander2
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11 posted 01-01-2010 11:08 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Thanks SFA, enjoyed your humor at purpose, thanks for the sweet comment.

yann
2islander2
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12 posted 01-01-2010 11:09 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Thanks therightside for the sweet comment and the read. appreciated it.

have  a nice day

yann
 
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