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whiskey
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0 posted 2009-12-21 06:37 AM


So much time I
Sat and watched you waste away
All my life I have waited
For this! chance now its drifted away

So much time you
Left me thinking mind lost
Is it too much to be wanted
Given everything then taken away

As I sit listening
To the clock tick tock the minutes away
You were once here now your taken
Life ended away now this day

Never did you
Ask for nothing always giving
Now your sky fallen, darkeness
A concrete plaque holds your name

You always told
Your mistrust this world
Squashed your soul left vacant mind
Nothing to hold life

Now gone the ground holds
Peaceful angel dirt surrounds
Forgotten lost no longer you
Me sitting watching clock ticking
Time


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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
1 posted 2009-12-21 10:08 AM


Good write, whiskey. I like your name.
Paul

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-12-22 09:19 AM


A deeply poignant write!

Love,
Margherita

HopeAgain
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since 2009-12-06
Posts 11
Toronto, Canada
3 posted 2009-12-22 11:47 AM


That was beutifully written.
very deep !

great job

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