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Shades of Love, Shades of Blue.

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viking_metal
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0 posted 12-19-2009 07:04 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for viking_metal

I saw you there,
and you were magnificent.
Tall like the sky and lean like summer
seventeen shades of blue,
eighteen shades of a loving hue.

I'm not a godly man,
but I prayed to what might be
that I find something like that-
something like you.
Tall like the sky and lean like summer
seventeen shades of blue,
eighteen shades of a loving hue.

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I saw avatar yesterday, and here's my official plug:

Avatar is the greatest movie of all time. You're robbing yourself of something truly great if you don't see it. I have never liked a movie as much as I loved this one. Absolutely hands down the most amazing film I've ever seen. GO SEE IT.



Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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The Lady
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1 posted 12-19-2009 10:21 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



I like the poem
and thank you for the review
I was wondering!
viking_metal
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2 posted 12-20-2009 12:46 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Thanks Lady.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Margherita
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3 posted 12-20-2009 04:54 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Very inspiring poem, dear Paul.

I read the presentation of Avatar and saw a few scenes and I am intrigued, yes I will go watch it and I have no doubt that I will like it too.

Love,
Margherita
viking_metal
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4 posted 12-20-2009 11:48 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

You'll love it I'm sure. It's my favorite movie now. I've seen it twice in the three days it's been out, seeing it again tomorrow night. haha.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

whiskey
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5 posted 12-21-2009 07:29 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

A great read I liked it


Julie
viking_metal
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6 posted 12-21-2009 08:47 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Glad to hear it, whiskeyjulie.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Chalmette Guy
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7 posted 12-22-2009 02:44 PM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chalmette Guy

You are very talented sir.

It's amazing the phrasing that you come up with. Enjoyable to read.

viking_metal
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8 posted 12-22-2009 07:20 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Thanks very much my good friend chalmello monsieur. That is quite a compliment, especially coming from yourself.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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9 posted 01-02-2010 09:16 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Hey Paul!  Happy New Year  -  hope that you survived the celebration!  I like the poem lots - and I don't go to movies much so probably won't go see Avatar.  But, did I mention that I like the poem lots?

A
viking_metal
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10 posted 01-06-2010 02:42 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Yes, yes you did. Thanks very much. You're a doll, Aliboo.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Klassy Lassy
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11 posted 01-06-2010 10:22 PM       View Profile for Klassy Lassy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Klassy Lassy

I always wished I had the crayons with every shade of blue when I was young.  You put a new spin on that one!  I may have blushed 18 shades of pink, though.       Enchanting lines, "long and lean, every young man's dream; she turned every head in town!" (?)

I really enjoyed this one, too.

~Karen
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12 posted 05-27-2010 03:58 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

Inspiration can come from the most unlikely places.  I liked this poem of yours.
 
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