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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Fading, the light within dims over time, now matters, wonders to see. Feel cold, warmth, soft rain on faces, hear waves raging, roaring into the night, tasting lips, scent of wild rose on skin, gliding fingers over hemispherical curvaceous beauty, truly alive, truly love. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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Father Member
since 2009-12-15
Posts 58Confusion |
I am astounded by this. The imagery is positively sublime and lends itself to an overall feel of peaceful indulgence in that other person's very existence. Well done! |
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QuietAstronomer Junior Member
since 2009-12-13
Posts 18North Carolina, USA |
Passion, par excellence. Superb. Thank you. QA |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery and Romanticism! applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Laverne Pacquire Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96 |
pretty and gratifying to read. thank you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
exquisitely romantic... |
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