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Night Streams.

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Goldenrose
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0 posted 12-15-2009 07:05 PM       View Profile for Goldenrose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Goldenrose


Upon soft sheening sand,
alone i walk cold,
bedewed by blustered salt
spray, head down into
the wind of an
improbable tommorow. Empty days
of longing to hear
the cadence of a
voice that calls to
me from a past
life that sees easilly.
Winter time brings heart
clutched warmth to my
bed, thoughts flood through
like silver esturies in
moonstream, blackness my mind,
illuminated by love, tender
devotion precious as rare
birds eggs, my life
colour different, but unforgettable.


Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.
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Laverne Pacquire
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1 posted 12-16-2009 08:10 PM       View Profile for Laverne Pacquire   Email Laverne Pacquire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laverne Pacquire

(empty days ....   this line and sentence is exceptional..

your works are fascinating philsophically and emotionally.

the form needs a little work.  

interesting pen

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


2 posted 12-17-2009 06:07 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Phil, this poem engaged all of my senses.

~ Captivating, vividly descriptive and drew me in to the moment. A very fine piece of writing.



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GBride
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3 posted 12-22-2009 09:54 PM       View Profile for GBride   Email GBride   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GBride

"...thoughts flood through like silver esturies in moonstream, blackness my mind."
very nice indeed!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


4 posted 12-27-2009 08:13 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I always enjoy the nature walks through your eyes.

This is just beautiful, inspite of the chill.
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !


5 posted 12-27-2009 08:50 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

wonderful imagery as always!

much applause for this 'penning' !!
The Lady
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The Southwest


6 posted 12-29-2009 12:47 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


"head down into
the wind of an
improbable tommorow."

ahhh Phil
you never miss

beautiful

jwesley
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Texas . . .


7 posted 12-29-2009 09:02 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

...walked in your footsteps, my friend...knew it all...


j.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


8 posted 03-24-2010 06:06 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

unforgetable~
 
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