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kindredspirit
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0 posted 2009-12-15 04:07 PM


Words once entwined with white noise
Reflect sheer truth into a distant future
As if the moon has fallen from our night
Timeless resonance of what nobody wishes everyone could hear

I wave fear like a white flag
To catch the wind (your eyes)
Behind every other silence
Consuming the space between our hearts

We could greet our separate realities
With a handshake and pleasantries
In order to merge the shades of who you are
With my black and white yesterdays.

[This message has been edited by kindredspirit (12-15-2009 08:29 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-12-19 03:07 PM


"We could greet our separate realities
With a handshake and pleasantries
In order to merge the shades of who you are
With my black and white yesterdays."

I just love the above~~

M

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-12-19 06:44 PM


A fantastic closing to a fine poem with profound thoughts inherent within!

Love & Light,

EA

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The Lady
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The Southwest
3 posted 2009-12-19 10:26 PM




very nicely done!

kindredspirit
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4 posted 2009-12-27 12:03 PM


Thankyou very much
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