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winter song |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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that was dark winter when love was othering me watching and denying me when dreams squeezed from my fingers played in the place he never touched where he did not long to go that was dark winter when I knew need light has found me traced the gathering in my throat winter song pulse laid me bare in this winter of quiet a small yellow flower stands in white relief against the naked window words never heard in this room embrace my ear low voice snug growl of laughter secrets told undercover new to this time of year in this winter of quiet plenty has become my portion to give and to receive |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Every line is spectacular, dear Kate! What a winter song you share with us! The emotions penetrate under the skin ... Bravissima! Love, Margherita  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Kate, I read this last night and savored it through the night. It's beautiful and shares so much with us. I like winter. A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A beauty and wonderfully written piece, Lady!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You do have a way with words that makes reading such a pleasure. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is beautiful, Kate! I love what you do with words. Owl |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Very well done Kate, enjoyed. Lindsay |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you so much dear Margherita. Hugs to you Alison, you winter loving woman! Thank you so much ARCTIC WIND.  And I feel the same about your words Barry! Thank you! Diana, thank you. Thank you Lindsay! |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
love the winter season . . . . . Lana |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You sing a lovely winter song, Lady Kate.  I absolutely adore the following visual: "in this winter of quiet a small yellow flower stands in white relief against the naked window" And yes, "to give and to receive" Love & Light, Linda  www.lindadowd.com |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Lana! Linda Angel, you say the sweetest things. Thank you so much. Love and light to you. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Makes Winter worth experiencing! Not a cold read in a line ... Great write. CT |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
v. well written! ... grand imagery ... "in this winter of quiet a small yellow flower stands in white relief against the naked window" applause for this 'penning' ! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you CT high praise poet… thanks |
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