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Zeigeist
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since 2009-12-09
Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2009-12-13 04:18 AM



This Oneness

with only breath
and a will to be,
i touched

tentatively
wisps of karma
greet and dance

familiar and demure
they listen
and connect

shared need
fills void
love laughs

this vibe
this world
this oneness

spins us

Zeitgeist.


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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2009-12-13 05:27 PM




powerful work Z


Zeigeist
Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311
Michigan
2 posted 2009-12-13 07:57 PM


Thank you Lady. I always appreaciate your replies.

Z.

viking_metal
Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
3 posted 2009-12-14 02:20 AM


Short lines
are neat
and easy
to read.

this piece
was real good.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Zeigeist
Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311
Michigan
4 posted 2009-12-14 07:46 PM


Thank
you
viking
for
your
reply


Zeitgeist

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2009-12-15 06:16 AM


Very captivating!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2009-12-15 04:16 PM


Welcome To Pip!


ARCTIC WIND

Zeigeist
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since 2009-12-09
Posts 311
Michigan
7 posted 2009-12-18 05:24 PM


Thank you Margherita and Artic for your replies and your welcome. Its good to be here.

Zeitgeist

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