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Wake-up Call

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 12-13-2009 04:17 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

This one is quite angular
a peculiarity of ways
just her stance
when she says "huh?"
She's a kitten
yawning
"awwwwwwwww"
her pink tongue
oblivious:

"What is that you said?"

She is perpendicular;
she wears boots to have her say--
stomping click-heeled down the hall
I hear her enter my domain,
cautiously, the door's refrain:

slam

it locks her in -
ashamed
when I look at her
and wave?

she's sorry that she came.

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Zeigeist
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1 posted 12-13-2009 04:22 AM       View Profile for Zeigeist   Email Zeigeist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zeigeist

Put a smile on my face. Thanks

Zeitgeist
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2 posted 12-13-2009 12:04 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


outstanding
Rosebud1229
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3 posted 12-13-2009 03:21 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

slam i loved that when the door goes slam after the boots take on a persona of their own excellent.
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4 posted 12-15-2009 12:42 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Growing pains... the emotional ones are even more prolonged than the physical. *S*
SlowlyFallAway
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5 posted 12-15-2009 03:12 PM       View Profile for SlowlyFallAway   Email SlowlyFallAway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SlowlyFallAway

Very original. Loved it.
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6 posted 12-15-2009 05:51 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Well done Ser...   Nothing like holding
the trump card when one needs it.
serenity blaze
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7 posted 12-15-2009 09:54 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thanks for reading.

My love to you all.
JamesMichael
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Enjoyed...James
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9 posted 01-02-2010 06:31 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Karen,

I like this so much that I saved it - thank you for sharing.  I miss reading your poetry.

Happy New Year.
Alison
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10 posted 10-26-2010 05:59 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

nice
 
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