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In Passing

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


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In Passing


its funny
just how far we fall
when we think
we are so right
to find out we’re
wrong

and dreams
change
with each passing night

"I'm so hard to handle
I'm selfish and I'm sad."
— Joni Mitchell


© Copyright 2009 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


1 posted 12-13-2009 11:57 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

helen - sometimes we think we are wrong, but we're still right. Hope you're doing well...

BC
Rosebud1229
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2 posted 12-13-2009 03:27 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

short and to the point love it.
watchingsummer
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i like how simple that was, but still meaningful. it's difficult to write a short poem and still make such a strong point with it.

good job!

"If I know what love is, it is because of you." -Hermann Hesse

The Lady
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"and dreams
change
with each passing night"

you seemed to have stripped life to the bare bones Helen
moving

passing shadows
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yep
JamesMichael
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Enjoyed...James
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state of mind


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agree,


bernie
email me


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

 
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