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Open Poetry #45
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Fade
Junior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 38
on a (temporall) plane
0 posted 2009-12-10 02:48 PM


in the fog
there is no vision
so i fumble
in the mist.

a scary place,
this darkness,
and ignorance
is bliss?

in the valley
of the shadow
even gray shades
seem to glow.

but the truth is
still obscured
no matter what
i think i know.

my light
is only temporal
and flickers
in the drafts

of the night winds
when the sun sets,
and the time
for work is past.
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Nancy Hardin
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since 2009-12-02
Posts 58
Nevada, United States of America
1 posted 2009-12-10 04:01 PM

Really moving. Love the cadence and found "but the truth is still obscure, no matter what I think I know," to particularly touch me.
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