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HopeAgain
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since 2009-12-06
Posts 11
Toronto, Canada

0 posted 2009-12-08 07:43 PM


Standing before it, as my eyes studies the place
Where we once used to sit, now only an empty space
This wooden bench, where we would talk of love and trust
Now colorless and ugly, covered with so much dust

The trees have grown old, the grass sick and long
A place known to a love, where it once did belong
It’s been darkened, the place emptied with time
Fading beauty, of a love through its prime

Seek the winds, find each breath our love took
A love that grew as the sky, is all in one look
Seek the memories that are yet floating in the air
To find the love, we would once hold and share


I walk away from the place, of a love once ours
Knowing these will blossom forever, amongst flowers
Standing before it, as my eyes studies the place
Where we once used to sit,
now
only

an empty space.



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LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
1 posted 2009-12-08 10:02 PM



Hope Again, rather a sad one but poignant

and well written, enjoyed. Take care.

Lindsay

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2009-12-11 10:58 PM




"Seek the winds, find each breath our love took"

only one of the excellent line in this poem
somehow my favorite....

beauitful work HopeAgain


HopeAgain
Junior Member
since 2009-12-06
Posts 11
Toronto, Canada
3 posted 2009-12-22 07:35 PM


Thank you to both of you for your kind comments .

cheers

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