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JamesMichael
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0 posted 12-08-2009 05:38 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael



Almost Anything


She looks nice
sitting there,
diamonds in a
heart shape
in her hair,
possibly bought by
her latest boyfriend,
willing to do anything
to be with her again,
well almost anything.


JamesLee
03December
2009



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nourzihane
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Algeria


1 posted 12-09-2009 02:07 AM       View Profile for nourzihane   Email nourzihane   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nourzihane

Dear James

you Write poetry in different colors and creat

thank you for your creativity

My respect
Nourzihane
Margherita
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Eternity


2 posted 12-09-2009 08:27 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Your gaze seems to be both appreciative and inquisitive, dear James.

Lovely write.

Love,
Margherita
2islander2
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3 posted 12-09-2009 02:23 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

lovely consideration, love is almost perfect.

regards

yann
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4 posted 12-22-2009 03:59 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

James,

I really like this poem.  

Alison
GBride
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5 posted 12-22-2009 09:46 PM       View Profile for GBride   Email GBride   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GBride

cool stuff
SlowlyFallAway
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6 posted 12-23-2009 12:37 PM       View Profile for SlowlyFallAway   Email SlowlyFallAway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SlowlyFallAway

"well almost anything"

its a horrible feeling, knowing the one you love won't REALLY do anything. just almost.

nice write.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 12-23-2009 05:46 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Nourzihune, Margherita, 2islander2, Alison, GBride and SlowlyFallAway for the wonderful responses...James
The Lady
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well almost anything

nicely done James

jwesley
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9 posted 12-29-2009 08:59 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Well written James...I always found with women, once rejected, they were like a brand new shoe tainted with mud when I stepped in the wrong place...I never wanted to wear it again, no matter how strong the yearning...

j.
LindsayP
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10 posted 12-29-2009 08:47 PM       View Profile for LindsayP   Email LindsayP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LindsayP


Nice one James but if you altered your words
just a tad I think it would sound better.

She looked lovely
sitting there
With heart shaped
diamonds in her hair.

I hope you don't take offence as I know some people do but it is a lovely poem
and I enjoyed reading it. Take care.

Lindsay
Robert E. Jordan
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since 01-25-2008
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11 posted 12-29-2009 08:55 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo James,

This works very well.  Keep up the good work.

Bobby
noman
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12 posted 12-30-2009 08:58 PM       View Profile for noman   Email noman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for noman

Enjoyed this.
Earl Brinkman
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13 posted 08-01-2010 09:38 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

This is a gem.  Enjoyed it.
 
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